A Night at the Beach

Let me start by saying, I love this pose. I personally find it sensual and romantic. Also, I am not known for commenting or critique, as such, and as a fairly new entrant to 3D, I am probably not the best to say anything. I can tell from my view, however, the things I would personally like to see addressed.

1)If the moon is behind them, unless a second source of light is from the right, such as maybe a streetlamp, they would be more in shadow. (though I know this makes it much harder to see the front of them. Maybe a distant light source softly colored, and low intensity)

2)The waves. I know light and water displaces. And maybe it is just my sight, but to me, the way the lighting is on the water, directly behind the couple, is diagonal to the left. If it is to show a wave or other movement in the water, then the rest of the water seems a little to calm. If it is to show the moonlight reflection, maybe turn it so it lies a little closer to the rest of the ripples in the scene.

3)The sand. I know how hard it is to get a model directly onto a surface. Especially a softer surface, such as uneven ground. And this may just be me nitpicking, but if they are on the soft wet sand of a beach, to me, it seems they would "sink in a little." They seem to have a weightlessness to them, that maybe part of what you are trying to convey.( the feeling of floating in love perhaps)

Let me finish by saying again, how lovely this is, and the concept of a soft kiss in the moonlight is all together, sexy. Be they same sex, or not. Should not matter, as love knows no bias. I enjoy this picture, as the calmness and serenity seems to exude from it.